Monday 26 January 2015

Alone in the forest

The light was fading, creating new shadows and dark patches around me. Eyes glimmered from tree hollows. The wind wailed between distorted trunks, carrying the sickly stench of rotten wood. I moved faster, ignoring the twigs that caught on my clothes and the damp leaves that stuck to my skin. Then in the distance I heard a wolf howl ...

Now continue the story!

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  1. You need fire make it with sticks you need food,shelter,blanket all those stuff to keep safe

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  2. Through his way of hunger he swept me and he was ready to pounce,ready to eat my flesh,so I gave them my blue hood to red birds.He chased the red birds into the lake. The fact that of a wild beast swimming sound terrific,so the so the red birds gave me back my hood,then when he was at the bank a fishermen got him then he swept all the water out of him and went.the fishermen looked quite weird so he went home to have his lunch so he remembered he packed lunch when he went fishing but that was days ago so the reason why he went is the fishes are his lunch but he didn't have any so his wife order him his lunch so he ate it all and his family didn't have any so they all had fierce eyes and went home to have more.so I contacted the police but the police was a talking bear so then director frog and I told him all the story then the fox.





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    1. Then my grandma told me her secret,she doesn't play bingo games she wasn't a ordinarily grandma when she was snow boarding she was playing with her team but she was dropped of by the bandit then she got her rope and swung across the finish line.After that she got her parachute and went to blue hooded and told her to use the blue hood so I did and went.

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    2. After that my grandma was with the parachute then it went in the fan and locked her into the closet then she heard the wolf opening the door then the fox open the closet and put the squirrel inside it and she was screaming!then when I came inside What big teeth she had and what big ears she has and why doesn't she move her wrinkled mouth to be countuuinsd

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    3. Wow, what an imagination Abdi. Your story reminds me of another we read recently!

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    4. then when i said what wrinkled mouth she had she was not my grandma then I thought for a moment then when i know who it is it was the wolf!so i used my karate skills to beat him to the ground then a man was cutting the biggest tree then it fell and made him run into our window and break it then we call the police then the detector said that you can be a happy ending agency so we all did and all solve mysterious happy ending things.

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  3. The shining sun light in the burning bark, more and more animals came to scar us starring and breathing. On people say
    Oh no what shall I do I'am to young to get eaten so I ran away! I need a good night sleep

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  4. I was even scared than before I thought I was going to get eaten by the wolf I was starving for food and shelter I couldn't run any further so I stop and had a rest for 1 minute then I started running again I went deep into the forest I did not know what to do.I even thought there were more than one wolf there might be 10 wolves.I would like to be home with my family.

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    1. Then what happened Melissa. Did you escape from the wolves? Did you escape from the forest?

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  5. In the forest you should never ever think about living in the scary forest with all the mean wolves and all the trees waving side to side.

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    1. You should be writing a story about being alone in the forest Kaian. Read the question carefully before you comment.

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  6. I am scared alone in the woods I need food and shelter and some water. Every morning I wake up and try and find my house again and again. Hello wolf do you won,t to be my friend. Yes and cum into my house and play with my little cubs. I will protect you from danger in the woods and I will give you any think. Cum on cubs less play outside and get some berries. These berries are very noise can we go home now yes cum on den The End.

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  7. The light was fading, creating new shadows and dark patches around me. Eyes glimmered from tree hollows. The wind wailed between distorted trunks, carrying the sickly stink of rotten wood. I moved faster, ignoring the twigs that caught on my clothes and the damp leaves that stuck to my skin. Then in the distance I heard a wolf howl ...

    'Awooooo!", came the second howl as I sprinted faster than my feet could carry me, swerving and swooping away from the pack of wolves. I fell down as the wolves tried to bite me.
    To be continued...

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    1. I ran Like a fast cheetah and then escape really speedily and i climb up a tree and a was safe. Then the wolf groaned" Get down from that tree or else you will get bitten",! I didn't believe them. I stayed there until i felled a ant crawling unto my skin and it bite me. I cried" until they healed me, I should have listened to you". They Healed me but they started to get and and stick there out i ran faster then my small feet speeding like sonic. Then after i ran across the forest and fell. I still ran because they could have cached me and hided under a tree nothing can catch me there.

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    2. Then I carried on with my journey and heard a lion roar and it came to me I through a rock at him and tried to attack quickly but then about 26 more came a ran and jumped on a log and carry on running I was so terrified. Afterward I lost them and did see them again , when I was climbing on millions of rock a really poisonous spider was there and I shouted" ahhhhh". And through it off my hand and I reach up that vocano full of lavar in it and climb back down

      The end

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  8. I was very terrified because the wolves were howling very loudly and I was shivering in the deep dark forest

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    1. Then what happened Ashraf? Surely you can write more than one sentence!

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  9. I did not feel alone as soon as I heard a howl of a wolf I started to run for my life. Suddenly, I bumped into a wolf, and did not move a mussel. Thank goodness, because I escaped. I had built a den out of leaves, and wood. More of them were for the pillow, then less fro the mattress.

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    1. But how did you escape Emily?

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    2. It was a good thing I had a bag of rocks and a small chicken first I took out the bag of rocks and then I threw each rock one by one when the wolf got really angry I threw the chicken far far away so far that I can not see where it landed.

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  10. I was walking throw the forest and the sun faded until there was know light just the moon in the distance I heard a sound and I tracked it down then I saw a wolf I ran as fast as I could as I as running I saw some matches so I ran with the matches luckily it was not used a ran into a cave and made up a plan to escape the wolf started to howl and a pack of them came I ran so fast I felt the swift wind blow on my face and I got lost I tried to to use my the wolves court up so I got out the matches and lite one and threw it at the wolves I was so scared I said to my self "what am I going to do there's know signal"what was I going to do.to be continued .......

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  11. ! Sudanly a twig snaped I ran as Fast as I can I finaly sore a part of the woods that hade bilians of trees twigs dropping down from the trees so I felt like building shelter I got some leafs for the rain to not go in my stike shelter I got hungry i sore a dear I tride killing it but it ran away quickly I sore river bancs so I thort is is that? water I got my can got some water an ran to my shelter I felt sleepy so I made a bed

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  12. Zavier and wiktorFebruary 02, 2015 1:41 pm

    If I was alone in the forest and the wolf was going to eat me I would be horrified and there won't be one wolf there will be a pack of wolves their will be a baby wolf a toddler, teenager and adult and the huge daddy wolf he will have rabies. The whole pack of wolves will you and you need to make a fire and you will be scared of them and if you try to hit them they have very good reflexes a when you run you will get lost when your running the wolves and the wolf is faster than humans and. The wolf will mark its territory.When you see a wolf and you would not run then the wolf will eat you alive. And if you lost them they will sniff you Down.to be continued...

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  13. The dark got crepea and crepea but when the full moon has rison wolfs started to creape hunting for food.But just then one of the wolves smeld boll and crept to that boll and chased it a round and sudenly the wolve cached it and ate it for super.The next day the sun was about to rise up in the sky. To be continued .

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  14. I was very scared because the was tarring sowns they was like this Awoooooo but it was scary then I thouter the was I feelt like I want to go to my house. I was all all alon I wuntid to have my Mum and my Dad back because the was terrifying because it is really scary if I had my Mum and my DadI will not be scary for me I had to eat slug because I had nothing to eat. To be continued.

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    1. I was so scared that I did not know what to do. I was standing in front of a huge terrifying beast. It's teeth were sharp like swords and it was ready to pounce. I had to get away or kill it! I climbed a huge tree and the wolf kept circling below. Then I remembered I needed to find water, shelter and fire or I would die.

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  15. As soon as I heard the wolf I ran as fast as I could. Then I checked my pocket and I found some matches and I escaped to somewhere safe so I could make a shelter I made a fire to keep myself warm. I thought I heard a wolf howling but as i woke up I heard the wind blowing the twigs of the tree. When I went deeper into the wood I saw a baby bird on a nest. Then I went even deeper into the woods I suddenly saw a fox I couldn't believe it I ran as fast as my feet could carry me.

    Later that day I went back to my shelter so I could have a rest.

    To be continued...

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    1. Later that day I went hunting for animals when I came back I ate the Turkey and I saved some more for the next day. Everyday I wonder who takes my Turkeys. I stayed up late because I wanted to see who has taken them. I saw that the wolves took them so the next day I set a trap.

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    2. I was scared because I thought the Wolf was going to gobble me up I was thinking of a plan.

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    3. I set a trap so when the wolves come and get the turkeys the trap will catch and scare the wolf away

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    4. The next day I decided to go to my granddad and my grandmothers house. I didn't want to go because I thought bears would chase me away and try to eat me for dinner. So the next day I collect pebbles so I could find my way back when I got lost in the forest I took the sack of turkeys with me for my lunch. I wanted to go back to my mum and dad but I could not find my way back. When I arrived ay my granddads and grandmothers house nobody was their so I went back to my shelter crying because I was alone in the forest.

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    5. It was lunch time so I hurried to find turkeys to eat for my lunch. When I came back I saw a cottage at the edge of the forest I brought the turkeys with me. It was a long journey but I managed to get there. There lived a man with a brown beard. I knocked the door and the door was opened by a little boy he said '' I will tell my dad that your there'' I said ''ok'' The dad came and said ''I can come in'' he told me were I came from and I said I was lost in a forest when I was going to my grandparents house but I was suddenly tracked by a wolf and it appeared from nowhere.

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  16. And I quickly ran behind a tree every time he howls. Then he saw me I ran and ran my feet was tired so I eat my sandwich the wolf herd me eat the sandwich and I dropped it and started running I made him dizzy by going round and round then I went to the over side of the bush and I took as many bush wood as I can and made a little shelter I had a bottle an apple and pasta. There was a little bit of bush wood left so I made a fire. I worried about if the wolf just destroyed the shelter so I went out for turkey hunt and on my way I tripped and banged my head on some wood then I said to myself "just what I needed. But I carried on with my turkey hunt. Right when I started walking a turkey appeared from no where then I to be continued.

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    1. Saw the wolf with his family with my own eyes. I ran back home and thought of a solution I took a knife and ran to the wolfs family and stabbed it right through their hearts. When I finished killing them I celebrated with joy...

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    2. After I went home skipping with joy singing my faviroute Lolaby. Then I arrived home I made another fire with a stick on the top and I said"asta lavista turkey" and I placed him carefully on the stick. I was so happy to eat. I was thinking about eating the delicious skin. When I stopped dreaming about the turkey,the turkey fried better then I imagined. So I started eating a tiny bit and left some for the next day it became my breakfast and dinner. This is a funny story I'd like to tell you that I stayed there for atleast 12 months in December the 30th I found some one who was heading to my country,Britain I stopped her and said " I beg you please can I have a ride to Britain there's this crazy wolf that keeps on following me I don't know if there's more can you bring me to to be continued...

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  17. I felt so scared I heard a wolf I felt it was going to eat me I went to run then he found me then it wanted to catch me I was so tired wen I was running the wolf went some were else I started to make a house for my house I had food and water I saved some food for my self I excapted I did not know what to do then I saw the same wolf wen I was running the wolf though that he saw somebody running he did not matter To be continue...

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  18. I did feel very scared the cracks of the twigs made me feel like a wolf was stalking while I was walking but I did not look back I kept on walking the I noticed I needed shelter and food so while I was walking I picked up twigs and branches and leafs and weaved them together and made a house then had to eat what ever I could see then I fell asleep when I was sleeping I heard an"awoooooo". I woke up with a flash and then I believed it was a dream to be continued ...!

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  19. If I was in the forests all alone I would be wondering we're my perants are.

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  20. I was in the forest all alone with nobody and I was absolutely feeling disapionted. I was scared in the forest all alone with no one it was so quiet in the lonely forest. I needed to get some food and some water, shelter and fire to get warm so I don't in the cold it is the middle of winter. To be continue

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  21. I was so scared and I did not no what to do.I just have to find a way to sovive and my only hope is to kill the wolf

    I need to get some food and some water,shelter and fire to get warm so I freeze in the snow it is the midl of winter
    To be continued...

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  22. I herd a howl deep in the and it was getting closer and closer. I was frittend then I realized that she was a nice wolf. She took us to her cave and she fed us milk and figs.we played with here cubs and I don't like shearing so I am always fighting with my brother.something fritening had happened. A man with a long ginger bird, a wight robe and a long stick grabbed on to us and chased away the wolf and the wood pecker...

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  23. I saw a wolf jump on me like a tiger while anther one was poking me with a very sharp stick. I managed to escape by pulling the stick off that wolf and just and faced it to the front wolf and poked the belly of it . It ran away from me and I was running for my dear life because the other wolf wanted it's stick back.I looked back and saw the other wolf was in pain it's belly was bleeding it was suffling and cwerving and in a matter of seconds the wolf died .I said " this stick could be very useful." And that's when more wolfs came.The wolf that wanted the stick came first all I did was to stand where I was and faced the stick at the wolf to be continued ...

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  24. I did not know what to do I did not know where it came from. I was wondering which way to go. Then I saw bright yellow eyes in the bushes so I ran the wolf chased after me. I tripped leaves fell onto me the wolf did not see me. To be continued

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  25. I felt skedaddle wen I hear the worf howling in the forces and I felt skedaddle in the forces olon on the forces and I was shoo wen I siting no worf was here To be contined...

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  26. Me and my brother were feeling so scared we thought we were going to drown but we were so lucky to hit the side of the river bank we heard something in the bushes it was a she wolf

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    1. This is not Romulus and Remus Jordan, you should be writing a different story. Continue writing from the paragraph above.

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  27. It is very scary if it was night a wolf might jump out. You need a blanket to keep you worm and shelter so when it rain you don't get wet.so go under a tree

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  28. I was in the forest I heard a howl in the forest and I know what was that it was a wolf he looked at me with those green angry eyes then I ran away from the wolf I tricked if I was try to be like another wolf then my plan worked amazing then I ran away I jumped over the bushes luckily the wolf never saw

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    1. Well done Arafath, but you need to use full stops. Carry on your story below.

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    2. Well done Arafath, but you need to use full stops. Carry on your story below.

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  29. Ones upon a time there was to boys could Romulus and Remus pushed into the river bank and they never know were going they bump into a bank but a she-wolf saw them naked wen there were in the basket

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    1. Excellent start Jada, but now write your own story about being lost in the woods.

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  30. I heard a wolf howl and it was getting closer and closer I got scared. A wolf came and took us to her cave and got us milk and figs. Then I realized that she was a nice wolf. we got to play with her cubs. A bad tempered fox came and wanted to eat the cubs but we did protect them with the twigs and the fox went and tried to find another plan. Remus got captured and taken him to the king...

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  31. The man took us as his own children. we wanted to build a city but I did not know where to build it. I went ahead and started to build the wall Remus was jealous and jumped over the wall. I got upset and killed him.

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  32. I was scared and though that the wolves were going to eat me alive
    What I needed was water to drink and a nice warm fire and a nice warm tent
    To be continued

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  33. When I heard the wolf was gone past me I got my head up then I felt cold and I did not know what to do. I dod not want to sleep on the ground. The next day when I was wondering through the forest I found my way home. I was so happy I ran and knocked door. The End

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  34. I checked every tree in case I found any wolfs.I had a tent so I gathered logs around me .I had a match stick so I put the logs on fire in case the wolfs comes to eat me.Next morning a wolf saw me and was running at me there was no fire so I ran as fast as I could I stopped behind a tree the wolf did not the wolf crashed in a rivers.I built a shelter with sticks and leaves I created a weapon that will scare the wolfs away it was a stone sticked to a stick It will pinch the wolves and it will make them give up tring to kill me.One night I saw a wolf it looked like that wolf was the leader of the strong and powerful wolves.I saw my tent I put it on fire so the wolves will get slower.It looked like they were caching up they all had very sharp claws I hope they don't rip me to bits I had no more match sticks I tripped and I claimed a tree when they catches up they were skraching the tree like they wanted to make the tree drop.I had no other choice I had to jump to the tree next to me.I just remembered my weapon so the weapon scared them away.It looked like that pack called all of the wolves so I jumped and the thunderstorm came.To be continued . . .

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    1. Super and very imaginative story Nathaniel. This sounds like a real adventure! Where did you land after your jump? Please continue your story!

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  35. I checked every were if there was wolves or bears the trees where so tall I couldn't see a thing I was so cold and hungry I slept for only 5minutes I didn't want to get eaten or kidnaped then I was tired I was looking for food but all the food was gone then I heard something it sounded like a wolf then I saw a wolves a every were there was know were no way I could get out then I saw lots of them I was trying to escape but they didn't let me there teeth are rasher sharp I think there going to eat me then they went to get food then I ran as fast as I could they were following me I lost them.

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    1. How did you loose the wolves Jordan? Then what happened? Did you escape from the forest or live there forever? Continue your story below.

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    2. Loosed them by hiding in a bush then a builded a bout to swim back home I also bring some food with me so I don't get hungry then a pith came not just one but groups then I reached home ran so fast they couldn't go on land so they went back were they came from

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  36. Little red riding hood was scared because it was all scary like a night like this one she got really scared as soon little red was going to open the door she said grandma how big eyes you got the wolf said all the better to see you my dear but grandma how big hands you got all the better to hug you my dear but grandma how big teeth you have all the better to eat you ah little red shouted a woodcutter heard her scream the woodcutter cut the tale and got chased away little red riding hood learnt her lesson never ever ever talk to strangers while going to her very own grandmas little cottage
    THE END

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    1. You are retelling the story of Little Red Riding Hood David. You should be blogging your own story!

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    2. I was walking in the deep dark forest when suddenly I heard a wolf howl,I was frightened,I didn't know what to do.But luckily I found shelter,but I still Heard howls.I runned. Then I noticed it was going deeper and deeper into the forest.I was stuck in the middle of nowhere.

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    3. Is ruined a word Joel? What is the past tense of run?

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  37. Ones upon a time there was a boy who live in the. Woods with his mum and dad and the boy had never enter the forest because there was wolf out in the forest that could eat him and his mum said go and pick some leaves out side in the forest and the boy was scared to go on his own because a fox could eat him all up and he would not like if he ate him up

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  38. Then wolves came and he asked them please can you tell were I am,yes would said said the wolf.As soon as they open there jaws he now what they were going to so as soon as he open is jaw he runny away oi you come back her!
    to be contiune

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  39. One dark and horrible day i was lost when my granddad left his cottage,i was freezing and i had no shelter.Suddenly,i heard a
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    wolf howling i was terrified.I thought it was an evil wolf.Then it was chasing me so i ran as fast as i could it almost caught up

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    1. Carry on Lamine and next time write to be continued at the end of your post.

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    2. ...with me but a tree was in my way so I climbed up the tree then I lost it.In the morning I went to my granddad's cottage and he was in my mother's house in the city I knew that because he told before he left. To be continued...

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    3. Then I slept in the tree at night.I saw a kind wolf then I climbed on her back and she took me to a cottage which was so quiet.I knocked on the door and the teenagers and the kids and the baby's inside it were my brothers and sisters and cousins.There were nobody in there but they let me in.I was scared because they were watching horror movies.They said they were going to put on what I want in one minute but they took 5 hours.So instead I played on my xbox 1.They said I can watch what I want but I said ''its ok you watch your scary movies''.

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  40. I was very terrified beacause they were so loud I sprint and I hit a tree I was veary happy then I said oh OOoh I better run they beaver know I was there I shouted hip hip hurry to be continound

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  41. Once apon a time there was two girl's called Stephanie and Emily they were having a walk around the countryside but suddenly, they ended up in a big forest they remembered somebody went in there they never came back ever again most of the people said the wolf ate her but they never believed them at all so they holded each other's hand's and went in they heard a scream HELP! but they ran as fast as they could to save her but they sore wolves they were guards and the lady was inside they thought Stephanie got an idea they both dressed up as a wolf and saved her her name was Alice
    THE END

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  42. I was starving no food I could find then in the forest the wolf were howling.all of ausuden a big wolf aperture and chased me all around then I triped and fell then a came big wolf but it diden't attack me so before she/he would take me I ran they followed me I thought I lost the pack so I hunt for bear and eat them so the hunt being when I found some food.

    The next day I plan how to escape so I would clime up a tree and see how far away it would take so then I could get out of the forest so I can find my family and say any thing so stoopid again TO BE CONTINUE...

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    1. So I started to hunt and find my way💧 one drop at a time fell and hit the grownd to be continued

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    2. Did you find the bear Jamoya?

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    3. Yes I did all three of them

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  43. I was sacred I ran so fast I can not see the wolfs. Then I when I was tiered I fell asleep. The next morning I saw a wolf I screamed! Then he grabbed me to his den he looked after me.I was feeling happy to have a wolf dad.

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  44. I am scared alone in the forties I need food and water I need shelter to. I wonder if my mum and dad are looking for me. Every day I wake up filing very scared. Try to find my house but one morning when I wake up there was a tree and the tree was moving and moving. But it was a monkey a noise monkey who said do you won't to stay at my house. He said yes! When I got there I sore all of the monkeys even the god monkey one day a baby was born and jake said called it. B en they said yes it was a good name jake said the monkeys. Said do you won't to go to the park the baby cart talk but less go to the park.

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  45. about any thing so he loocked away. So he saw a nover person he started chasing the person not me i thought the wolf was running after me so i went to my house so i went to sleep i herd a straing sound it was an owl i real lise that i did not have know familly and frend so i saw somebody he was scaird i gave her som water and a blankit to keep her worm
    to be continued...

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  46. And a nice pillow to put my head on so when
    I sleep I don't have a bad sleep but suddenly
    I heard a wolf getting closer and closer to
    Me as I was picking up my stuff and
    Running as fast as I can so the
    Wolfs do not eat me or I don't get
    Chased again by the wolf ever
    Ever again and I want to keep
    My self very very VERY safe for ever


    THE END.

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  47. she said to me what is your name i said to her it was justina i did not know where was. Iso i went back to sleep the girl made her on bed for her to go bed. I was cothing to much then i dricked some thing to make me feel well so i began to sleep then it was morning i slept well we were hungrY. So we brushed are teeth then we had breakfast we dricked some water to calm are selfs down To be continued

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  48. Suddenly I sore a pack of wolfs it ran up to me but I got to scared I built a shelter went to sleep and got up I said that's it I'm killing the beasts I made a sword and tride killing them but it was Sad so I left them and they said in a wolf voice you can live with us wolfs to pretect you THE END

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  49. so she does not get cold then it was morning then it was raining i was after i was going to see it was sunny it was not. The rain was getting deeper next it started to get night then it was morning. after that the sun was
    To be continued

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