1. What does it feel like being trapped in a cage, with hundreds of animals staring at you and taking pictures?
2. How do you feel about the animals who trapped you in a cage at the zoo?
3. When you woke up from your dream, did your feelings about the animals and zoos change?
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What other questions would you ask the character to find out about how he felt trapped in the cage?
1.If was that person I would be sca red and anxious because the animals that I've been mean to are looking at me in strange ways and want to buy me and want to set me free. Maybe I've been sent hear to realise that it's not just humans that have feelings animals do a swell.
ReplyDelete2.i think we deserve it because we have done things like that to animals to the animals even worse we have separated them from there family so if other humans have witnessed this before they might of had the same thought .
3.when I woke up from my dream my opinion of hurting animals because they are wild animals have changed I think like we live are lives hear on earth they should as well.
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Why have they trapped me?
What do I still have to learn?
Why do I have to be trapped in a cage?
Why was it not just in a life lesson?
Why was it just me or was there other children?
1. In a cage I would feel worried, scared living in a colossal cage.
ReplyDelete2. If an animal trapped me in a cage I would feel frightened, and forgive them for being spiteful and rood.
3. When I woke up from my dream I felt like I was at the zoo and I saw animals and human body's.
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DeleteWhy have they trapped me I done nothing wrong but only a little?
It's very scary in this cage lonely?
It's very creepy?
I would feel so scared because it will be outragers my own they might eat me . I might even stay there for ever.
ReplyDeleteYou have missed some words out Firdaous. Write this again.
Delete1. Why are all the people looking at me I feel outraged they are really looking strange at me I feel enbaressed, why is this happening to me? Why don't they set me free to live a better life . Every time I am here nothing ever changes, I'f I was the animal it will be a horror to get out. I feel like a prisoner I will never escape. Maybe I have been sent here to reliese that it's not only animals the live in cages maybe humans should because they do not have feelings for animals.
ReplyDelete1. If I was trapped in the cage I would feel shy and embarrassing because these animals are forcing me into the cage and all I do is eat the same thing over and over again and nothing never changes it is like prison when I am trapped in a cage. I miss my whole family and my loved ones I miss it when my mum is cooking food and my cuffy nice smooth bed.
ReplyDeleteShould you write embarrassing?
DeleteEmbarrassed
Delete1. I feel so bored and I need my personnel space how could I possibly live here I want to see the world with my family I want to go home.
ReplyDelete2. I hate the zoo more than my dad hates the zoo when I break free I will take revenge on them once for all
3. Yes I have realised the animals have a boring life in the zoo
How do you feel about the animals, now they have trapped you in a cage?
DeleteI feel mad and upset I wish I could change my mistakes or go back in time, at least I wish I could go home for a week I hate the animals
Delete1. If I was crowded by thousand's of animals I would be embarrassed because everybody will be talking about me and they will also take photograph's of me. I want to be with my loved ones and not in this old, dirty cage. I want to be back with my family so I could hear all my dad's silly jokes.
ReplyDeleteIs crowded the right word to use?
Delete1. If I was trapped in a cage surrounded by thousands of animals I would be embarrassed because everybody will be talking about they will also take photographs of me. I want to be with my loved ones and not in this old, rotten cage. I want to be back with my family so my dad and mum can take me to the restaurant.
Delete1. If I was trapped in a cage I will be so lonely this is not how I call home it will be called a dump trapped in bars and flashes in my eyes. Also trying to get my attention I ...... I want to go HOME! I miss my family. So much my dad taking me to restaurants and my mum taking me to funfairs.
ReplyDeleteCan you answer questions 2 and 3?
Delete2. I feel angry because they don't no how it feels to just be look at the same view every day so why can't they feel how It feels to be such in a tiny little cage. Why are they just laughing away when it not funny, why are they so rude just banging away on the glass like it is nothing to them, but that is actually home just because they have food it doesn't mean they have to be rude to me
ReplyDelete1. I m. Feeling de pressed because hundreds of animals are staring at me .h ow an I going to get back to my family ?l feel lonely because lm away .
ReplyDeleteNow try question 2.
Delete1. I would feel depressed , because all the heads starring at me and I get stage fright so I could get cage fright. Once I get my hands on those filthy animals on you don't want to know what's going to happen ... I used to feel smpthy for them!!! But now, now their going to pay for this, they gone far enough
ReplyDeleteNow answer question 3.
Delete3. Yes now I know how the zoo animals feel locked up in cages. Always wanting to go and see their family's but never remembering them. But yet always missing them, they may or may not have a family but they do know they can at least make one.
Delete1. I feel so shy and embarrassd why did the animals trap me in a cage and there are hundreds of animals staring at me and they are banging on the glass making me so depressed like a poor human being,and now I'm never going to eat like a real human being and i'm not getting fed very well and I to stay in this worthless cage and these animals are now taking photo's to make me awful.
ReplyDeleteUse full stops properly when you answer questions 2 and 3.
Delete1. I fell very scare of the animal like they did taking picture of me and I did not like it. If those people did not take picture I will not be in this cage mabe the animal did not have space in this small cage that is small.
ReplyDeleteDo you mean fell? How do you feel about being on your own, away from your family? Then answer questions 2 and 3.
Delete3. When I woke up from the dream I felt what it's like being trapped in the cage. They feel like prisoner I think the zoo people should set the animal free.
ReplyDelete1. I feel so alone I wonder why they put me in here I want to go to my family because here is just a cold floor I feel like I'm in prison . I want to go back home to my I feel like I"m going to die . My mums food is so nice I want go back home
ReplyDeleteWho are you going back home to be with?
Delete1.i will feel so embarrassed and scared.I feel like a prisoner,trapped in a nasty old cage .Its like being trapped in a cellar.I will be frightened by their gloomy eyes watching me.Every single time i wake up nothing changes.its like I'm never going to come out of here.
ReplyDeleteHow should you write i? Remember to put a space after a full stop.
Delete1. If I was trapped in a cage lots of thing and I would be shy aggressive like the animals out of control and everybody will talk about me and I will not like it. I will also feel embarrassed and what could I have improved is my behaviour,that was the reason I was here I shouldn't have come to the zoo in the first place is this where I'm really supposed to be here,they don't even feed me properly and I miss my mums cook and my dad's joke why does this happen to me.
ReplyDelete2. Who would do this to me I'm only little,once I finish of the cage,I will get my hands on them filthy animals the will go back to there little stinky cages and we can take photographs of them and talk about the and let's see if they will like it because I bet they won't so I don't like it either, so don't do it to me then. If both of us don't like then stop it now,I felt sympathy for them and now I will take revenge.
Delete3. Yes now I know why i had that dream to teach me a lesson about how they feel in the cages oh now I feel sympathy for them,now all they call themselves is a prisoner all thanks to me why do I do this bad stuff every time does it look like I want to be bad to the animals,no so please I'm really sorry animals can't you give me one chance,after all I was in that dream adept for nobody else.
DeleteNow does they feed me the same as the animals?
DeleteWhen is it my feeding time?
Great work Abdishakur. Does this sentence make sense?
DeleteNow does they feed me the same as the animals?
Write it again please.
1.I feel up set because my mum is gone,my dad is gone and Harry is gone people are shaking the cage. What am Igoing to do?!
ReplyDeleteHow would you feel with hundreds of eyes looking at you?
DeleteTerrified because I'm going to be shy and I won't like people taking picture
Delete2. l thunk he is angry because they trapper him in a cage he might cues the animals with nasty worded.
Delete1.i,m trapped in the most cold place like a igloo. I can't get out the cage unless I had the key ebarrased that all the fun having no cote now it's so cold
ReplyDelete2. All the good time I was having now it's bad thing happening to me I don't no what a did
1.I feel diprest because l can't bee fri l can't beliv that you extract a animal from the gangol l nid to bee fir one day l tos want to bee fri with my family.
ReplyDelete1. I feel sad why can't they let me free because I want to see my family I want the animals back in there cages not people?
ReplyDelete2. I feel just fed up of these rude animals why can't they live in the wild I want my family now?
3. It never change it wasont a dream it was real the animals archly locked me in a cage?
Think again about question 3, now you have been trapped and know what it feels like, has your opinion changed?
DeleteIt never change it was it wasn't a dream,it was real,the animals actually locked me in a cage.
Delete2. I feel furious,now I really hate them. Why did they do this to me.When I get out of this mess I will take my revenge. They should know how it feels like to be in a nasty prison
Delete2.I would feel furious with the animals laughing at me.I should be free with my family.I miss my lovely comfy bed.i miss my family.
ReplyDelete1. What am I going to do my mum is gone. How am I going to escape this disgusting cage. How am I going to brake free
ReplyDelete2. I feel s o out raged those animals are the worst, when I brake out I will hunt them down until I find them. They don't know how I feel. they don't care if I'm trapped here! They just want to stare at me with those big eyes, if they are the only lucky ones. They would not like it if I trapped them. When all of them go back home they will be waiting out side waiting for me.
ReplyDeleteNow answer question 3. Has your opinion changed now you have woken up?
Delete2.I certainly hate those animals they will when I get out I will get my revenge and when I get my grubby hands on those animals I will lock them up in this cage I they will have to beg for mercy and when every human is here they will look at them and we will bang on the glass and we will take lots of pictures of animals to make them awful and I will plan a great escape and I will copy what they have done to me they will not have big space they will only have little space,and I WILL HAVE MY FREEDOM!!!!!
ReplyDelete1. I feel so upset because I am trapped in this small cage and I feel vey cold inside the cage, I don't like the animals staring at me, when they take pictures they always flash the light, it makes my eyes hurt.
ReplyDelete2. I feel so mad at these animals first I felt so sorry for them now they have to come up with this plan.
ReplyDelete3. When I woke up from my dream I was so shocked that I wasn't in a cage. I was just in my bed.
1. I would feel outraged because if an animal ever trapped me, I would always try and hide my anger then, curl myself up in a ball and whisper to my self angrily. But now they've trapped me in a cage I'm never trying to hide my anger again, I will get so angry, that they'd wish they never locked me up in the first place!!! Do you want to know why? Well here's why... I will go so angry that I'll be able to break out of my prison, then they'll be running all around shouting " contain the human!!!!!!!!!!!" Then I can go back to my real family
ReplyDeleteHow did I get into here I will make all of you into animal stew. We are clever more than animals we humans we can craft more thing then animals man kcal build fire animals can not build fire hundreds of eyes are looking at me. "Stop looking at me" I will kill them I will take revenge it does not make any sense. this cage smells like poop i will hunt them into pieces.
ReplyDeleteWhen I woke up I rushed downstairs with Harry and I yelled "MUM " can we go to the zoo the reason why I wanted to go to the zoo is because to see if there is people in cages.
ReplyDelete1. If I was locked in a cage surrounded by hundreds of animals I would feel embarrassed and self conscious
ReplyDelete2. I hate the way people are just staring. They are taking pictures of me. They didn't even ask me that what makes me mad.that they don't show nolige they don't see how sad I am they don't help me to escape. All they plane to do. Is to take pictures. That's all they do when they go pass. The cage when I,m trying to relaxed and came down.they Re making to much noise. The makes me rais how sad I am. I'm so amazed how they don't think about me. They eat nice food infront of me. They never think of giving me none.
ReplyDelete1. Why are they doing this to me I did nothing to them, I feel self- conscious because I'm trying to sleep and In a second there is so much banging on the glass. I'm so depressed because nobody hardly take care of me I don't sleep properly,I don't eat properly and I don't rest properly I never get to do any thing!!
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ReplyDelete1. Did he feel like a prisoner
2. Was he feeling sad
3. Did he like it in the zoo
1. I feel shy and embarrassed because all the heads are staring at me, I feel like a prisoner in Jail I want to escape from hear. The cold hard floor is not as comfortable as my bed has a pillow and blanket, animals sleep on the floor I cannot sleep on the floor it is like a hard rock that is so heavy you cannot pick it up, I miss my mum she cooks nice food and my brother tells me off even my dad tells terrible jokes it is so annoying no one laughs.
ReplyDelete2.I feel so furios at them when l get out l am going to get revenge on them l hate animals now I don't want to visit the Zoo anymore.why did the animals do this to me.they should know what it, feels like to be trapped in a cage all by them selves or not.
3.When I woke up my feeling changed about the zoo I felt like I cared about the animals again and the animals are nice even the butterfly's too.
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What did you do in the cage and how did you feel? What did you eat and how did it taste?
What a detailed answer Ishmael and Melissa. Well done!
Delete2. I feel so angry and when I brake free I will lock up all the rude animals and they will never come out agin!
ReplyDelete2. Why is diss hapning to l am only a Lion the hangers that cach animals nid to bee fro with or family.
ReplyDelete3.l should bee fir because am only a animal that live in the Gangol.
I feel so bad for the animal. I dream that I was stuck in a cage all alone and people was laugh at me and teasing me so bad. Even I don t know why I get rope into these thing .
ReplyDelete1. I wood feel sad and ashamed and miss my brother/my dad/my mum/ my sister.
ReplyDeleteI dream about me getting the in the in the zoo keeper bag and release the animal out of their cage then escape the zoo then go to Africa and come back
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