Friday 27 February 2015

By the seaside ...


Howling windwaves crashing belowseagulls circling above
First, think about what you can hear and how the different sounds make you feel.
Then, write about what the sounds remind you of.

44 comments:

  1. It's waving like a soft water in the seaside

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    1. This does not make sense Isaac. Write a short paragraph, describing what they sound like. Use similes and descriptive language.

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  2. The waves looks like a big rapids.

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    1. Yes, but what do they sound like Keightley and what does the wind and the seagulls sound like?

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  3. Some of them are hard waves and wind one made me feel scared to be continued.......

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  4. 1. i thought the sound was a thunderstorm. I could here whistiling clouds and the howling like a wolf i felt scared

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    1. Good, Nathaniel. What about the seagulls?

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  5. the water is howling like a twirling storm in side.I reminds me of a tornado coming to the beach.and it reminds me of a rocket going to out of space

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  6. the first sound is like the wind howling it makes me feel scared. it reminds me of the first time I had my swimming lesson.
    the second one makes me feel frightened when the rocks clash taughether make a hard sound that makes me wonder.

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  7. I could hear that the waves were going slower then they became louder and louder and then it became sound like a flud and I thought it was just slower but it became a enormous sound because when you see the waves make enormous splashes and if it is cold it means the sea is very cold and if you go inside it is cold and you will catch a cold and if rocks fall in the sea you have to stay back To be continued....

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  8. 2. i can hear rocks calapsing because the water is bashing the rocks as hard as it can. I thought it was a plane takinng off it reminds me off when i was on the beach

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  9. it 's waving like a soft water in the seaside

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  10. The first sound was the black clouds whistling. It sounded like it was thunder. It reminded me when the rain was pouring on the floor. The second sound was the waves crashing against the rocks. It sounded like i was at the seaside. It reminded me of going to the beach. The third sound was the eagles squawking in the sky. It sounded like there was a baby bird calling his mother. The fourth sound was at the edge of the cliff the water was like a wave. It sounded like a wave. It reminded me of going fishing.

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  11. the sky is dark as night. The sea is push back and forward the .water is splashing HARD. it remind me of me going to the beach . it make me feel like going home .

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  12. I could hear wavse crashing onto each other and making holes in the rocks.i could hear enormous waves crashing onto the big black rock and making gigantic splashes.

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  13. the first one sounds like the see going in to each other and the birds sound like there sing in the sky and the see sound like it was bashing in to the rocks to brake them.

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  14. when i hear the sound of the seagulls it reminds me of when my brother is crying over a toy.

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  15. the water sounds like a twirling storm in side. it reminds me of a tornado coming In side. under the water there is gigantic rocks and there is water crashing onto the rocks.

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  16. the woter is crashing and it mike me the berds are skriming and the wiv the iron man sand like wlof and it meyk me sked

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  17. the seagulls make me think that there is danger a head they make me feel scared I think that there is someone or something coming to me a head.
    this sound makes me scared because the rock a smashing into each other by force. the sound reminds me of the last trip to margate because the water was smashing onto the rocks.the seagulls sound makes me frustrated because the seagulls sound is like five car horns in one.

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  18. The first one i can here rocks tumbering and whiserling and crashing. The secone one i can here the water moving side to side it makes me feel calm and relaxing like i was on holiday. the theird one i can here the sur crashing on the rocks below the four one i can here the seagull talking and going side to side.

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  19. the first sound was the black scary wind howling and whistling and spiting out rain from he clouds and when it whistle it sounds like a ware wolf howling the second one sounds like a thunder storm and the wind is very strong and when it hits the rocks it bashes like a underground train speeding past people .

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  20. I think that was a stoam that it was howling . It feels like when you are wisling. It remend me of when my little sister is criying. I think that the stoam is very bad .It feels like the stom is very cold.It remend me of when the stom is going.

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  21. the waves sounds like a underground train and some simblles crashing together.

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  22. The first one sounds like a bunch of clouds howling all around the sky. It makes me feel scared.

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  23. the first sound is like a thunderstorm. Icould hear clouds bashing crashing and icould hear howling like there was a wolf in the seen it reminds me of when i first learnt how to whistle it makes me fell like i/m having a nightmare

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  24. the first one was crashing and bashing and the second one wasvery smooth and it reminded me of wen i was little and we went to the seaside and we went to the sea and i swam inside of it and tryed to swim and the last one seagulls sqauking like a babbymonkeys.

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  25. It sounds like cars bashing cashing on ice and tabrines shaking and drums banging and house falling on to other house and a huge recking ball hitting down shops .

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  26. the roiks is krash to gvure wive the wore

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  27. I could hear tall waves hitting the rocks.The seagulls sounded like they squawking parrots or a car horn. The wind sounds like heavy clouds.

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  28. the wind sounds like a thunder storm and the rain clouds were pouring rain evrywhere.the seagulls sound like baby eliphants useing there truncs to make a trumpet noises.

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  29. the first sound was black dark clouds howling and whistling.the first thing that the iron man saw was black clouds moving quickly.the second thing that the iron man heard was calm and gentle.He saw a huge clift and a sea under it.the third thing that the iron man saw was big waves crashing against each other.He heard smashing waves.the last thing the iron man heard was seagulls sqauking.he saw them fighting with each other.

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  30. The first sound,sounds like a wolf howling. The second sounds like a rough water smashing against the rocks. The last one sounds like someone singing so badly.

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    1. Great comment Lamine, especially the seagulls idea. It also sounds like a baby wailing!

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  31. The howling wind reminds me of wolfs howling the waves crashing sounds like boulders tumbling the seagull flying looked like angles flying .

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    1. Yes the seagulls do look a bit like angels Emily, but what do they sound like?

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  32. The seagulls sound like they want to a attack some one food or it sound like it praying. It reminds me of the gental waves on the sea side

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  33. You can hear seagulls make sound they annoying you in the peace, quit,and the calm waves it was very good until these seagulls came

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  34. It sound like the wolf howing and reminds me of the trip to fishborn places because we was next to the forest

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    1. What does the sea crashing against the rocks sound like Jamoya?

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  35. I can see and her the waves crashing against each other the seagulls look like angels sawing they are like swans they are all white flying away with there mum I don't like the dad sound because it makes your heart want to pop!

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  36. The sea was crashing like symballs clanging the segguells were wailing for there food the wind is howling for his preay

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