I think he had walk 60.9m. And he was made out of metal and clothes. I think he was riding on a train the he crashed and landed in Jupiter. After the aliens took him to his master and the master made him bad and made him steal money from the bank
I think he had walked for 7 miles and he had come from a different planet called iron planet he was made by a iron robot that was old and when he finished he died.
The Iron man looks very lonely and sad at the edge of the cliff, he looks as though he is about to jump off. He has walked a long way from home around 400miles, his feet must be burning like fire. His head is as big as a dustbin and his arms are as long as a snake. His legs are as wide as a giants door. I think he has lost his iron family on his travels, I'm not sure why they left him. He was made in a junk yard by a man named Max and he has special powers.
It looks as if iron man is going to jump off the cliff.iron man has been walking for 4000'mils and he is tired thirsty and hungry.iron man has no family or friends. He is all lonly but there is only one person that iron man likes wich is his owner.iron man dose not no if he has a family,he is not sure if his owner made him a family.
The Iron man walked from 350miles, he is very lonely and when he was travelling his Iron family left him. He has a heavy Iron head as big as a dustpan and his big iron feat wide as a giants door. His Iron hand long as an centipede.
His owners name was Jack. He made the iron family but the iron man got lost in the woods so he went to the edge of the cliff when he jumped off the cliff he fell and bumped his head, he got up and saw someone lonely he became friends with him.
The iron man walked all the way from Devon to London he had walked for 500,000miles.He said he came from Devon.He was made in Devon's most famous metal maker's.
The iron man does not have a family or friends but he's lonely all lonely but he is taller and he got up the cliffs and he sees everything from the top because he taller To continued...
The iron man walked for day, moths or every days.he came from iron out done plannet.he was made out of a batter iron that was Tring brown,they made him like a human being but he was not and they put a liquid in to make him come alive
I think he has walk 400 milles and he has came all the way to u.s.a. I think he came from a iron man family i think he was made a person who made of peases of junk and done it in a yard and i think he is lonely and has know family or friend his arm is longer than a door and maybe he has lost his family and he is thinking about them and he is thinking about them eswel.
maybe the aliens master made iron man he crashed in earth and transformed into Jupiter and fainted then the aliens caught him. and made him iron and metal then they made his name iron man because he is a man and he is made out of iron. and a computer was control him and made him steal money so the aliens can get money and blast him into nowhere he knows.
Thé Iron man does not have a family to live with he has no friends .And i am on thé end of a high Cliff.Thé Iron man wallked 900,0000miles long from Italy to london . Thé Iron man was made in a factor thé oner's name is jack . Hé was made out of metle
I think that Iron man walked 500 miles. I think that Iron man has came from a planet called Iron planet. I think that Iron man was made by an old Iron Inventor that was great and one day he thought to make an Iron world Iron people!
I walked for miles and miles until it's the crack of dawn or I lost my memory and the climb up the cliff for fun really and get to see the sea.i came from a hospital when I was born the planet wasn't safe for Baby's so my mum said she will launch me into earth to explore.i was made in a factory where they made a bunch of iron mans they all speak different countries so I was a Spanish speaker.
I think iron man walked miles that his legs were getting tired iron man is standing on the brink of a cliff he wanted to down for fun and iron man wants his head to fall in to amilean piece he wants to die
The iron man look like a handy man that help people in his world and he came here to help the people in this world to help people to crush car and that's why I think he is helpfull.
He might of came 900 miles away.Maybe he came from garbage.I think he was made of metal and iron
ReplyDeleteHe might of want to jump into the see and drown.
DeleteI think he had walk 60.9m. And he was made out of metal and clothes. I think he was riding on a train the he crashed and landed in Jupiter. After the aliens took him to his master and the master made him bad and made him steal money from the bank
ReplyDeleteI think he had walked for 7 miles and he had come from a different planet called iron planet he was made by a iron robot that was old and when he finished he died.
ReplyDeleteThe Iron man looks very lonely and sad at the edge of the cliff, he looks as though he is about to jump off. He has walked a long way from home around 400miles, his feet must be burning like fire. His head is as big as a dustbin and his arms are as long as a snake. His legs are as wide as a giants door. I think he has lost his iron family on his travels, I'm not sure why they left him. He was made in a junk yard by a man named Max and he has special powers.
ReplyDeleteFantastic Sahayla! I really enjoyed reading this. You used some good similes well done!!
DeleteIt looks as if iron man is going to jump off the cliff.iron man has been walking for 4000'mils and he is tired thirsty and hungry.iron man has no family or friends. He is all lonly but there is only one person that iron man likes wich is his owner.iron man dose not no if he has a family,he is not sure if his owner made him a family.
ReplyDeleteThe Iron man walked from 350miles, he is very lonely and when he was travelling his Iron family left him. He has a heavy Iron head as big as a dustpan and his big iron feat wide as a giants door. His Iron hand long as an centipede.
ReplyDeleteTo be continued...
Lovely Mory! I'm intrigued to find out what happens next...
DeleteHis owners name was Jack. He made the iron family but the iron man got lost in the woods so he went to the edge of the cliff when he jumped off the cliff he fell and bumped his head, he got up and saw someone lonely he became friends with him.
DeleteThe iron man walked all the way from Devon to London he had walked for 500,000miles.He said he came from Devon.He was made in Devon's most famous metal maker's.
ReplyDeleteThe iron man does not have a family or friends but he's lonely all lonely but he is taller and he got up the cliffs and he sees everything from the top because he taller To continued...
ReplyDeleteThe iron man walked for day, moths or every days.he came from iron out done plannet.he was made out of a batter iron that was Tring brown,they made him like a human being but he was not and they put a liquid in to make him come alive
ReplyDeleteI think he has walk 400 milles and he has came all the way to u.s.a. I think he came from a iron man family i think he was made a person who made of peases of junk and done it in a yard and i think he is lonely and has know family or friend his arm is longer than a door and maybe he has lost his family and he is thinking about them and he is thinking about them
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The iron man had walked 44 miles
ReplyDeleteHe had come from a dirty scrap yard
The iron man had bean made by a crazy scientist .
I think he went 900 miles
ReplyDeleteI think he came from a garbage truck maybe he's made of iron and metal
ReplyDeleteWho do you think made the Iron man?
Deletemaybe the aliens master made iron man he crashed in earth and transformed into Jupiter and fainted then the aliens caught him. and made him iron and metal then they made his name iron man because he is a man and he is made out of iron. and a computer was control him and made him steal money so the aliens can get money and blast him into nowhere he knows.
DeleteI think a police-man made him to save people and arrest criminal.
DeleteThé Iron man does not have a family to live with he has no friends .And i am on thé end of a high Cliff.Thé Iron man wallked 900,0000miles long from Italy to london . Thé Iron man was made
ReplyDeletein a factor thé oner's name is jack . Hé was made out of metle
Wow the Iron man has walked a long way! why don't you think he has any friends?
Deletemiss the iren man will jamp of the chlif
DeleteThe the iron man came from a junkyard.he walked 100milles he was made by a nufer robot machine
ReplyDeleteI walked for 100 miles away.i'd came from deep deep under the sand where nobody knows a evil scientist made me and turned him into a frog.
ReplyDeleteI think that Iron man walked 500 miles. I think that Iron man has came from a planet called Iron planet. I think that Iron man was made by an old Iron Inventor that was great and one day he thought to make an Iron world Iron people!
ReplyDeleteI think Iron man walked 700 miles.
ReplyDeleteI think Iron man come from a scrapyard and lives there
I think the iron man walk for 900000 miles.
ReplyDeleteI think that he came from a dust bin.
I think who made him was his family because they needed a helper.
l Lost my family now l live in a gainer bin
ReplyDeleteI walked for miles and miles until it's the crack of dawn or I lost my memory and the climb up the cliff for fun really and get to see the sea.i came from a hospital when I was born the planet wasn't safe for Baby's so my mum said she will launch me into earth to explore.i was made in a factory where they made a bunch of iron mans they all speak different countries so I was a Spanish speaker.
ReplyDeleteI think iron man walked miles that his legs were getting tired iron man is standing on the brink of a cliff he wanted to down for fun and iron man wants his head to fall in to amilean piece he wants to die
ReplyDeleteI think iron man came from Australia. I think iron man was made in a shed. I think iron man walked for 7 years.
ReplyDeleteThe iron man look like a handy man that help people in his world and he came here to help the people in this world to help people to crush car and that's why I think he is helpfull.
ReplyDeleteI think he is going to jump of the cliff
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