"What have you saw on this crime scene?"If you did I would be happy and if one of those living creatures who live in Lilly pads with there slimy dreadful slime, those culprits may be have to do with the scene crime. Thos leathery and disgraceful frogs.
Think carefully about what the two characters might have been saying Abdi. Start with the reporter asking a question and the eyewitness replying. Remember to use speech marks.
I think that the reporter Is saying what have you see n yesterday night I saw lily pads fawning from the sky one them sinked into my window then it craked I saw frogs flying on them and I founded weared frogs can't fly on lily pads but they kept on banging on my door i found the best hiding place so i went there I saw a strange frog walking he was bigger than thewrest of them even me.
I think the man in p.j is an eyewitness because he is raising up his hand up in the air the detective picked up one of the Lilly pad and exam it to find evidence.
I didn't see any thing eccept my pet frog he's the only one in town could he be into crime scene,I don't know if he's in the crime scene but a frog, seriously a frog.A frog doesn't do that much harm and there little creatures if they did that much harm it wouldn't be my pet. Such as my pet you have a clue,and that is the lily pad so this is familiar like our incident there was a Lilly pad.
The man that is still in his pjamas is saying "I saw the same frogs on flying lily pads." The reporter asked the man"where exactly did you see them." The man awnserd "It was in the sky." Also he might be saying "I think the culprit is the frogs because they are on the lily pads all the time and after they go in the water and see they come back up straight away."
The man in his Pajamas might be saying " this is OUTRAGES I told the cleaners and the builders not to clean my house or build it again! WHAT AM I GOING TO DO? The reporter "escuse me sir but how can you see in the dark ? And what was on the lily pads ?
Maybe the man in his pyjamas is saying" I saw those Lilly pads falling from the sky and before they fell I saw frogs riding them and causing havoc." And the interviewer could say " when did you witness this , how long a go was it?"
Maybe the man in the pyjamas is saying" i saw those Lilly pads falling from the sky but i don't know anything about about the slime on the Lilly pads these frogs have cause a havoc " And the lady could say " when did this happen is it now?"
I woke up herring a splat I thought it was raining but it was raining lily pads I never saw that before it came faster and faster I said this is madness
The reporter might be saying do you now what happened the man in his pjyams he said yes. I do I saw a shadows in the road last night and I heard a crocking sound and I shut the window as first as I could.
there was a man in his dressing gown and he jumped out of bed and looked out the window he ran out of bed he saw wet soggy lilly pads everywhere he was saying why would someone do this the lady might be saying things like were you scared the man to let the howl people know.
"What have you saw on this crime scene?"If you did I would be happy and if one of those living creatures who live in Lilly pads with there slimy dreadful slime, those culprits may be have to do with the scene crime. Thos leathery and disgraceful frogs.
ReplyDeleteThink carefully about what the two characters might have been saying Abdi. Start with the reporter asking a question and the eyewitness replying. Remember to use speech marks.
DeleteI think that the reporter Is saying what have you see n yesterday night I saw lily pads fawning from the sky one them sinked into my window then it craked I saw frogs flying on them and I founded weared frogs can't fly on lily pads but they kept on banging on my door i found the best hiding place so i went there I saw a strange frog walking he was bigger than thewrest of them even me.
ReplyDeleteGreat Jordan, but you have forgotten your target of using full stops.
DeleteI think the man in p.j is an eyewitness because he is raising up his hand up in the air the detective picked up one of the Lilly pad and exam it to find evidence.
ReplyDeleteI didn't see any thing eccept my pet frog he's the only one in town could he be into crime scene,I don't know if he's in the crime scene but a frog, seriously a frog.A frog doesn't do that much harm and there little creatures if they did that much harm it wouldn't be my pet. Such as my pet you have a clue,and that is the lily pad so this is familiar like our incident there was a Lilly pad.
ReplyDeleteThe man that is still in his pjamas is saying "I saw the same frogs on flying lily pads." The reporter asked the man"where exactly did you see them." The man awnserd "It was in the sky." Also he might be saying "I think the culprit is the frogs because they are on the lily pads all the time and after they go in the water and see they come back up straight away."
ReplyDeleteSuper work Melissa.
DeleteThe man in his Pajamas might be saying " this is OUTRAGES I told the cleaners and the builders not to clean my house or build it again! WHAT AM I GOING TO DO? The reporter "escuse me sir but how can you see in the dark ? And what was on the lily pads ?
ReplyDeleteSome great dialogue Yumna. Remember to close your speech marks like this: "Woof", barked the dog.
DeleteMaybe the man in his pyjamas is saying" I saw those Lilly pads falling from the sky and before they fell I saw frogs riding them and causing havoc." And the interviewer could say " when did you witness this , how long a go was it?"
ReplyDeleteThe wickness might of said "lillypads were falling from the sky like rain.the ropoter said how did they wake you up
ReplyDeleteRemember to close your speech marks Jamoya.
DeleteMaybe the man in the pyjamas is saying" i saw those Lilly pads falling from the sky but i don't know anything about about the slime on the Lilly pads these frogs have cause a havoc " And the lady could say " when did this happen is it now?"
Deletei saw lilypads flying from the sky
ReplyDeleteThe eyewitness may have said that Jada, what might the reporter be saying?
DeleteI woke up herring a splat I thought it was raining but it was raining lily pads I never saw that before it came faster and faster I said this is madness
ReplyDeleteThe reporter might be saying do you now what happened the man in his pjyams he said yes. I do I saw a shadows in the road last night and I heard a crocking sound and I shut the window as first as I could.
ReplyDeleteThe reporter might be saying when did this happen.The witnesser might say yes at late night.
ReplyDeletethere was a man in his dressing gown and he jumped out of bed and looked out the window he ran out of bed he saw wet soggy lilly pads everywhere he was saying why would someone do this the lady might be saying things like were you scared the man to let the howl people know.
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