Friday 12 June 2015

The crime scene - Part 2


Write in character what the detective might be thinking in this scene.

27 comments:

  1. I think the detective might be think why would somebody trash the middle of the street leaving lilly pads.why would somebody leave soap or slime all over the street.it might be a frog ,it could be a person framing a frog so he/she wont get in trouble.

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  2. Mohammed,Uzair,samaJune 12, 2015 11:50 am

    The detective looks strange.

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    1. But what is he thinking Mohammed.

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    2. I think the detective looks strange because he looks really foucused like he's taking consideration In what he's doing

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  3. I think the detective is thinking who caused this .

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  4. Hmmm this job goes for me but, I only have a clue so I have to use that clue and give it to scientist to figure it out but , I need a group of guys,but where? A police I could get.*Soon the scientist figured out where the Lilly pad came from and after we got there we founded out another crime scene*. We saw the frog and cried,"oh my precious Lilly pad has gone and I don't get use my new one."we got yours said the detective. But first we need questions from you. When did you lost your Lilly pads?i lost them it was raining.okay here you go. Oh thank you today was my choir and that was all my luck so how could I repay you. Nothing really it's just my job.

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  5. "I wonder why are there so much lily pads on the road and on the rooftop that is so strange I have never seen this many lily pads,in my life there must be something going on only frogs go on lily pads maybe it is frogs but that's crazy no frogs can make this big of a mess."

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    1. Great Melissa, but you forgot your full stops.

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  6. The detective might be thinking " hmm these lily pads look very familiar to me in budliegh satern lake but it is far and only one suspect . I've got a mission to solve.

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    1. You mean "I've seen them before in Budleigh Salterton lake."

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  7. alonce and alaeJune 12, 2015 1:43 pm

    The detective might be thinking that he might know who the criminal is. The criminal might be a slimy wet frog because I can see lily pads all across the road.

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  8. who will do such a terrible thing to a tidy neighbor hood.This is strange you see lillypads in the ponds were frogs are not on the roads were cars pass by.I must go to the pond to see if the frogs are there if there not there i should go to investigate.

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  9. melissa from 3 blueJune 12, 2015 1:52 pm

    i think the detective migh be thinking why would somebody trash the neighbor hood and leave lilly pads everywhere maybe a prisoner escape out of prison and done this mess all over the place and i can see a man and a women interwview the man with a man with pyjarmers on telling people about what happen today.

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  10. I think that the detective is looking that the lilly pads with a pen because the lilly pads mit get his finger prins on it and he mit be to be contined

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  11. The detective is trying to look for evidence to get who done it there were slime and Lilly pads on the floor those cheeky frogs messed the town there was slime dripping down the Lilly pads yuckkkkk!

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  12. I can see a police man I/s thinking what is going on. how are there raining lili pads. sniffing dogs sniffing for evidence. the detective is picking up a lili pads with dripping goo coming from the lili pad drip drop coming of the lili pad. green coming

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  13. I think the detective is thinking I need to find out who done this to this road. Also, he might be thinking the dogs will help us find the evidence and the culprit.

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  14. What is this it just cannot be it never happen before I have to bring this to the lab to make professor analyse this is crazy ness it is wet, slimy this needs to be scanned I need to know what kind of slime it is.

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    1. Super ideas Sallyanne, but you must punctuate your work.

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  15. The only clues we have is lily pads what we need is the professor to analyse it and some kind of slime what needs to be scand we need to dig harder for clues there has to be more than one eyewitness some one or some thing must know about this this cace is not over

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  16. The detetive might be saying why on earth will somebody trash this road it really strange and wired the man in the pyjamas announced" he did not see what happen but he was hearing strange noise at the night, it was like water dripping in the sky".

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  17. I think the detective might be thinking that how could allof these lillypads get and this slime.
    I hope me and my team find out who did this to our clean and tidy city I can tell this will be a difficult one.
    I am lucky to have the dogs on our side to sniff out the naughty person who did this to us.
    I wonder who could have did this it can't be a human how could they have enought time?

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  18. He might be thinking why the lily pads are in this state and why the area looks like that

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  19. What is this water doing here I suspect that it might be from something wet and guwwy or slime I wander were it came from.

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  20. he could be thinking hmm why would any one do this terrosie the streets with lilly pads we must find ot who did this then lock him up

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  21. I think the dective might be thinking I never sawed this green slimy Sogy lillypad here on the rode.

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  22. chine me from y4bJuly 10, 2015 6:11 pm

    were could these lily pad from.

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