Thursday 23 October 2014

Telling tales


Now that you have watched the film, in the half term holiday, retell the story on our blog.
Remember to add detail to your story and make sure your sentences make sense.

39 comments:

  1. the boy robot is filling very lonely and he look like he jumped of a helicopter when he done sky diving with his cousin

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    1. Why is the Robot lonely Shaniqua?

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  2. They live a girl name Lisa she was very kind but nobody was kind to her.But one day they shove her of the space ship because they heat her so much.Now she lonely,scarcery and she has got a family any more.She trieding to find his way out but lost all alone.'I NEVER WILL FIND MY WAY HOME...I WHAT TO GO HOME.

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  3. One night there was a robot called Glattya. Glatya was working in the forest all alone.It was autumn and the lefes were faling of the tree.Glattya was hungry there was no food she rubed her tommy,then a train came along she jump on the train for a ride there was no one else to be found,she went into a corner and sat down. Glattya said oh no I am all alone. the end

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  4. The story was about a boy who goes to follow the a train to anywhere. The boy is made of recycled tin and he looks sad and lonly. The train is big and green but when he is on the train it is completely empty. At the end the boy still looked sad and lonely. I think that the autumn leaf may become his friend.

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  5. Once upon a time there was a lonely robot who lived in the wood's looking for his home because he had no one with him so when he goes to his home he will have a friend. the robot was walking and he saw smoke he folowed the smoke and it lead him to a truck that had the same picture that was on his tummy he was happy when he saw the truck because he was looking for his home and he finally saw it and he jumped on the truck and went inside to sleep he woke up in his home in front of a gate and the gate opened and some cars came past him he thought it was a car that goes to the shop. The car already went it made him feel unhappy so he ripped the sticker that was on his tummy.He wanted a friend that would keep beside him every second. he found a leaf and made it its friend.

    THE END

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  6. Once upon a time there was a little robot that was lost in the forest. He was made in a very far planet that know on knows about it.One day he found a large train so he jumped on it and went right inside.He sat down there thinking about something that we never knowed.One day he saw a factory with as many truck that can fit in.He went inside and rubbed his tummy for the first time.Suddenly he found a sticker on him and rubbed his tummy again because maybe he was sick or hungry.So he was steering at the sticker looked at it but he didn't know so he threw it on the floor. Stepped on a leave and picked it up because it fell down. It was autumn, because the brown leaves were falling from the trees.

    The end!!!

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  7. One day there was a robot that has been made in a large factory. After he had been made the workers stuck a sticker on him to show his date of birth and where he had been made. But then the workers threw him away because he was a bit rusty. The poor robot soon realised that he was lost in the woods, all alone with no one to care for him. He saw a train and he thought that he could jump on it but he was very scared but he jumped on the train were the open hatch and he found a place to sleep. It was dark and cold he wished he could find someone to help him. He did not know where the train was going. At last he reached the end of the line. It was the same factory where he had been built. TO BE CONTINUED

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    1. Keep writing Melissa. What happened next? Remember to include a name for your robot.

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    2. carry on blogging melissa this is great

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  8. Little robot realises that the place of origin is very cold and unfriendly ,he realises that his place is somewhere else.
    Little robot decides to follow what he likes to do,and where he wants to be.
    We are born in one place, but it's up to us to follow our hearts,and really live.

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  9. Some one help me I have no we're to go I don't have a family want I'm going on.I feel like rubbish no body care about me at all not ever my family care it me who.

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  10. Once upon a time there was a smelly,stinky robot he was from planet Zeal he was on a very special Mission but crash landed with a loud noise. It was autumn because there was leafs all over the forest floor. There was a train coming by so he jumped so high that he could climb on board. But again there was nobody there. All alone the robot sat in the cold damp train. He did not no where it was going. Would he find his friends? Finally the train stopped at the factory where he was born. Here was a truck that almost ran him over. But it turned around to the side at the last moment. He tried hard to find someone then he couldn't find he's owner that made him. So he got so angry he took his sticker of and took the leaf and ball and wandered away. TO BE CONTINUED





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    1. Where did the robot walk off to Abdi and what could have happened next?

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    2. He went off and have an adventure to explore was is these human beings and to discover nature what happens in earth discover the true happiness of friendship and have a happy and funny owner that let' him eat TO BE CONtinue.

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  11. Once there was a robot,he was lonely because he had nobody beside him.He was playing in the woods with the leafs.Then he saw smoke he followed,it was a train.He jumped into the train and sat somewhere,still there was nobody there.When he got of a gate opened and trucks were going in the train one went in a factory.It had a sign like the one he had on he's tummy.He ripped of the sticker and went,but then he turned around grabbed the leaf and went to the follow the sun and it was

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    1. Great work Joel. Can you finish your sentence and then tell me what happened to the robot. What is his name and where did he walk to?

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  12. Once upon a time there lived a lonely robot how lived in the woods he was always alone because he had no friend but he always wished that one day he would be found.But one day when he was walking through the woods he saw a lot of smoke so he was very curios so he followed the smoke and he saw a train with the same label that he had on his belly he was so happy he climbed on to the train and it was a long ride along the ride his eyes got very weary and he fell a sleep soon the train stopped and jumped out then in the distance he saw a truck one of the truck came at him and he ran very fast

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    1. Continue your story Sahayla and remember to use full stops.

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  13. Once upon a time lived a poor scientist he made a robot then it got old so the poor scientist throwed it away.Then the robot was lonely then he found a long train so he went into it.Then he was kind of in a factory then he made a leaf as his friend then he went to the forests then he found a fountain to clean himself then he went back to his poor scientist.

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    1. What happened then Lamine? Remember to add detail to your writing.

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    2. The poor scientist turned into a rich scientist then he buyed lots of tools.After that he was making lots of robots with his tools.

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    3. This a story Lamine carry on.

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    4. Then Everyone in the scientists workshop had a party and they all enjoyed it.

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    5. When the robot got lost again this time he got in big big trouble so whenever he went out the robot went with him then the scientist asked him "Why are you always lost this is why you have to come with me".Then the robot said "sorry,i wont do it again please may i stay home".Then the scientist said "no, you will do it again".

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    6. Next,the robot promised he wouldn't do it again and then the scientist was thinking until he agreed then he said "Today your going tommorow and the rest of the day's you'll stay home..

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  14. Once there lived a lonely robot he saw smoke and he followed the smoke he saw a train it had the same sticker as the robot the robot went on the train and he began to sleep.when the train stopped it made a loud noise that the robot woke up .The robot came of the train and when he was walking a car went speeding when he was walking then another car was speeding and it almost ran him over and he ripped the sticker of his tummy because he didnt like it.After that he took a leaf and he was making it like he had a dog.

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    1. What happened next Mory?

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    2. He went back were the scientist that made himself home.

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    3. Continue your story Mory, don't just write a sentence!

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    4. Then the scientist told the robot "stay at home i'll go to buy some tools". Then the robot told a secret to the scientist. He wanted to go with the scientist and he agreed. When the scientist and the robot got home the scientist decided to make a lot of robots so they can help him. While the robot was waiting the scientist told him to go to shops. Then he told another and another and another till it got dark and he slept until he heard a knock on the door and it was the 3 robots that were shopping. The next day the scientist made more robots he made 12 robots and all of them had to do work the oldest didn't have to or the scientist all of them had to clean the scientists workshop the oldest went to work. When he came back everything was nice and clean.

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  15. One afternoon there was a robot who was lost in a forest he found smoke and it led him to a train it had it's sticker the robot felt happy so the robot went inside and slepted. When the train stopped the robot woke up and came out there was a door in front of him it opened out came two trucks one

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  16. Once upon a time lived a lonely robot who had no friends and lived by him self and the lonely robot liked to play in the woods . He had a sticker that was related to something he saw the sigh and jumped on the train that had a sigh on it so the robot jumped on and it led the robot to a place a place that had lots o trucks and the trucks were the same shape as the robot sticker a truck came and nearly ran over the robot the robot ran out of the place and through his sticker on the floor and then he played with a leaf

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  17. On one day there was a loanly robot wallking froe the forest then he found smoke from a train so he ran to the train and found a same tip of sticker like his one on his tummy so he jumped on bord then the train stoped and he found this place but no one stoped for him so he went with a leath.

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  18. I fink the robot łos łuking alon and he soł the tren and he ript the stika of he go tu the trien and he gon tu łe he had bild in Sid bikos soł a lif from forest and he go bak tu forest and he łos happy soł he go dipa and dipa and he smayel.

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  19. I think that he got thron out of his house and he is all alone.he spruces everywhere but he has know where to sleep over night.it was getting dark soon so he had know choice but to sleep on muddy leaves.later next morning he was still looking for a place to stay.until this morning he found a three to sleep over night.

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  20. I think the story is about a loneliness robot that never had friends "Maybe he used to go to school but a very mistaken man came and shoved him into spaceship"Next the wicked scientists made a dangerous devices to make the robot sleep.After when he got to his scientists place he started to make him better.Then blasted him all the way to earth

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  21. I fik the. Robot is goł to the trani and he go to bak

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