She escaped from the witches of saying that she can not get up in the oven.the witch got in the oven then Gretel swinger the oven slam she saved Hansel with a crowbar and ran away
First Gretel wakes up and puts the kettle on and lights the fire ready for Hansel. The wicked witch wants to fatten him up and then cook him and eat him. Then she tricks the witch by saying "I don't know how to get into the oven, can you show me?". The silly witch climbs inside to show Gretel and then she gives her a big push and slams the oven door shut. After this she runs into the yard to free Hansel but then realises there is no key so she uses a crow bar to break the cage open. Immediately Hansel throws his arms around his sister and is so happy to be free from the evil witch. Next they go into the gingerbread house and see beautiful jewels and pearls in every corner of the room. They quickly stuff their pockets full of treasure and then head into the forest to find their way home. As they are walking through the forest they see a huge lake which they recognise and will lead them home. Gretel sees a beautiful duck and asks for a ride on her back all the way home.
Gretel sets the keltie it Next she shove the old nasty descustind wicked witch in the toasting steaming roasting Oven Free your brother Hop on giant duck back Look for home
First the witch woke Gretal and told her to get some water for the ketal.Next gretal triced the old witch i dont know how to put the fire on so the witch did it and gretal gave a little push to the witch and sh fall in and gretal shut the door and reskued Hansel from the cage.They ran and found julery and dimonds they stufed there pokets full of dimonds.Next they ran to the lake and found a swan and ride on it though the forest. Finally they found there home the dad coud not feel better after loosing his children so they said look how much dimond s we have so they throed the dimonds on the floor and they lived.
first Gretel collect the water for the kettel . next trick the witch and push the witch in the oven. after that free my brother. collect the perls . cros the bridsh.
Gretel pushed the old witch in the oven because she had a plan to kill the wicked old witch then she rushed outside the yard then she escape from the old wicked witches house because she was frightened from the witch then she freed Hansel from the cage then they ran and ran from the house suddenly they found a deep water Hansel and Gretel could not ross all the way to the river because they cant swim then Gretel sawed a pretty white duck then she shouted for help then the duck came to help Hansel and Gretel cross the river then Gretel say's lets cross the river one at a time because the duck cant carry two persons so lets go one at a time first Gretel go and hold the ducks back then they cross the river then Gretel get of the duck the Hansel hold on to the ducks back then he went then they ran and rush next they found there house then they rush to the house and they hug there dad and finally the step mother died soon because she was the old wicked witch then Hansel and Gretel where safe then his dad was so exited because he miss his children a lot then his dad was not missing the step mother because she was the witch then they tell what happened then his dad said I was missing you very much and IM so sorry I left you in the forest ill not do it again and the children say its ok finally they had lots of money then they eat then finally it was bedtime then they brush there teeth then they sleep.
1. I woke up early like a child ready for school. I lit up the fire and got ready to start steaming.I had a plan to escape and i did not tell anyone between my brother.
first I get up as normal and then I but fire in the oven and put hot water in the kettle. after that go to the stove and cook some delicious food for my brother then the evil old lady say"go and see if the stove is ok to cook in" but I said"i don't know how to get in" silly you and she went in and I slambed the door shut.I ran to the yard and used a old croobar to open the cage and me and hansel found so much pearls when we came out we saw big river we called a duck and the duck took us one by one acros the river we ran through the forest and we saw are home and the step mum had died so we lived happly ever after>
Oh This is so Hard work and cried on the way to fetch some water for The kettele oh I am scerd of The fire oh don't worry I will go in there so she too a chair and clam in to The oven and shut the door.
First, Gretel puts water for the kettle because the old witch said so. Then I shove the witch in the rosting hot oven and she was burning. And then Gretel free her brother out of the cage. After that they went to get jewls in there pokets and went but there was a long river and Gretel said to the duck "please can catch a ride on your back" and she said" yes you may but 1 at a time because I am not very strong as you" so Gretel said " you can go first Hancel" and the duck came back for Gretel and then Hancel and Gretel were back home safe and sound without no bits or scratches they were home and happy to see there dad.
first the old witch told Gretel to turn on the oven. Next the witch told Gretel to go and fill if the oven is hot and den she send I don't no how to do it and den she shoed how to wen she shoed her to dew it she pish her in to it she her in and den Gretel looked her in and she resk her brufer .
First hansel and gretel was sleeping at there house and hansel an gretel heard the step mum say to are dad that when we wakeup lets wakeup hansel and gretel to because we are going to bring them deep into the forest so they can never find there way back home so when the stepmother and are dad was sleeping hansel went out side to go and colect some stones so when the stepmother wakesup and are dad we dont have to colect no more stones and then hansel kwikly ran back in side t so that when our stepmother wakesup and our dad they cant shout at us so then hansel and gretel went schrate back to sleep
Gretel escape first gretel wacte up befor the old hag gretel start the ketel and hete the uven the hag wacte up went doun steers wen she did that she said feel the uven o I dote now how like this said the Nast Beas as she bend doun she feelt the uven as she was in there I gave her a poosh and whoch her roste arethter I went and got the cees and let my bruther free he rusht out like a bard we made a quic escape and said how we going to get Akros ha ducks can you pleas bring us a cross yes but at one by one gretel you go a cross firs ok arethter then hansel came on they finely got a cross and found there farver and they wer rich they wer All pleas to see echuver vout with hag they all wer happy to gever
You've remembered lots of details, Sallyanne, great! I especially like the way you describe Hansel rushing out like a bird! Try writing it again and adding full stops and capital letters.
First hansel and gretel wokeup as normal and they put water in the kettle and went back to sleep then they wokeup again and then it was morning and the stepmother and the dad didn't wake up yet so hansel quickly went outside and got alot of stones and then he ran back in side and pretend that he was sleeping then when the stepmother and dad woke up they woke hansel and gretel up so they had to get up out of bed and take off there night clothes and put on his going out clothes and then the stepmother put on her going out clothes as well and they all set off into the forest and they all went deep into the forest and when they was going there hansel was droppig pebbles on the way and when he reach there they was sitting by the tree and the stepmother and the dad said they was coming back for them but they didn't come back so 2 minis after they was looking for the house and they came across a ginger bread house and they ate the ginger bread house and there was a lady at the window and she said come in to the children and they had some food and they went to bed and when they woke up the next morning the the lady was telling gretel to do a lot of stuff and hansel got lock up in a cage.
First act like you are poting water in the ketle then act like you don't know how to Klime in the oven then when the hag go in posh the meaen old hag in the oven the get you're Brver. And run for dread um
First Hansel and Gretel was sleeping and Gretel got up as normal she put the cetel on and then she lthe fire to cook Hansel. The. Witch got up and said to Hansel get up lazy Boens then she got Hansel on his urme and dragged him in to a cage and loked it. The witch tride to trick Gretel but Gretel but she ses I don't no Howe to get in but the evil witch got in and Gretel gave her a great big push and slammed the oven and. Slam. The dor hansel got. The. Hrey the witch is
She escaped from the witches of saying that she can not get up in the oven.the witch got in the oven then Gretel swinger the oven slam she saved Hansel with a crowbar and ran away
ReplyDeleteFirst Gretel wakes up and puts the kettle on and lights the fire ready for Hansel. The wicked witch wants to fatten him up and then cook him and eat him. Then she tricks the witch by saying "I don't know how to get into the oven, can you show me?". The silly witch climbs inside to show Gretel and then she gives her a big push and slams the oven door shut. After this she runs into the yard to free Hansel but then realises there is no key so she uses a crow bar to break the cage open. Immediately Hansel throws his arms around his sister and is so happy to be free from the evil witch. Next they go into the gingerbread house and see beautiful jewels and pearls in every corner of the room. They quickly stuff their pockets full of treasure and then head into the forest to find their way home. As they are walking through the forest they see a huge lake which they recognise and will lead them home. Gretel sees a beautiful duck and asks for a ride on her back all the way home.
ReplyDeletePort no water in the kettle 2. Port the witch in the flaming hot oven 3. Set your brother free take all of the the diamonds ride on a bird
ReplyDeleteWell done Arafath, you have remembered exactly how Gretel escaped. How should you spell "port"?
DeleteGretel sets the keltie it
ReplyDeleteNext she shove the old nasty descustind wicked witch in the toasting steaming roasting
Oven
Free your brother
Hop on giant duck back
Look for home
First the witch woke Gretal and told her to get some water for the ketal.Next gretal triced the old witch i dont know how to put the fire on so the witch did it and gretal gave a little push to the witch and sh fall in and gretal shut the door and reskued Hansel from the cage.They ran and found julery and dimonds they stufed there pokets full of dimonds.Next they ran to the lake and found a swan and ride on it though the forest. Finally they found there home the dad coud not feel better after loosing his children so they said look how much dimond s we have so they throed the dimonds on the floor and they lived.
ReplyDeleteExcellent Nathan. Can you remember what happened to the stepmum?
DeleteFirst get up as normal and put hot water in the kettle.
ReplyDeleteDon't stop Jasmine. What happens next?
Deletefirst Gretel collect the water for the kettel . next trick the witch and push the witch in the oven. after that free my brother. collect the perls . cros the bridsh.
ReplyDeleteGretel pushed the old witch in the oven because she had a plan to kill the wicked old witch then she rushed outside the yard then she escape from the old wicked witches house because she was frightened from the witch then she freed Hansel from the cage then they ran and ran from the house suddenly they found a deep water Hansel and Gretel could not ross all the way to the river because they cant swim then Gretel sawed a pretty white duck then she shouted for help then the duck came to help Hansel and Gretel cross the river then Gretel say's lets cross the river one at a time because the duck cant carry two persons so lets go one at a time first Gretel go and hold the ducks back then they cross the river then Gretel get of the duck the Hansel hold on to the ducks back then he went then they ran and rush next they found there house then they rush to the house and they hug there dad and finally the step mother died soon because she was the old wicked witch then Hansel and Gretel where safe then his dad was so exited because he miss his children a lot then his dad was not missing the step mother because she was the witch then they tell what happened then his dad said I was missing you very much and IM so sorry I left you in the forest ill not do it again and the children say its ok finally they had lots of money then they eat then finally it was bedtime then they brush there teeth then they sleep.
ReplyDeleteWow, what a lot of writing Uzair. You have worked incredibly hard. Can you post this again using full stops?
Delete1. I woke up early like a child ready for school. I lit up the fire and got ready to start steaming.I had a plan to escape and i did not tell anyone between my brother.
ReplyDeletefirst I get up as normal and then I but fire in the oven and put hot water in the kettle. after that go to the stove and cook some delicious food for my brother then the evil old lady say"go and see if the stove is ok to cook in" but I said"i don't know how to get in" silly you and she went in and I slambed the door shut.I ran to the yard and used a old croobar to open the cage and me and hansel found so much pearls when we came out we saw big river we called a duck and the duck took us one by one acros the river we ran through the forest and we saw are home and the step mum had died so we lived happly ever after>
ReplyDeleteOh This is so Hard work and cried on the way to fetch some water for The kettele oh I am scerd of The fire oh don't worry I will go in there so she too a chair and clam in to The oven and shut the door.
ReplyDeleteThen what did Gretel do Jada?
DeleteFirst, Gretel puts water for the kettle because the old witch said so. Then I shove the witch in the rosting hot oven and she was burning. And then Gretel free her brother out of the cage. After that they went to get jewls in there pokets and went but there was a long river and Gretel said to the duck "please can catch a ride on your back" and she said" yes you may but 1 at a time because I am not very strong as you" so Gretel said " you can go first Hancel" and the duck came back for Gretel and then Hancel and Gretel were back home safe and sound without no bits or scratches they were home and happy to see there dad.
ReplyDeleteI'm very impressed by your comment Melissa, especially how you used speech marks in your work.
DeleteThank you mr highman for saying that and you are very kind.
Deletegretel escaped by putting the old woman in the hot uvn
ReplyDeleteYou need to explain exactly how she escaped. Use the five photos to help you remember.
Deletefirst the old witch told Gretel to turn on the oven. Next the witch told Gretel to go and fill if the oven is hot and den she send I don't no how to do it and den she shoed how to wen she shoed her to dew it she pish her in to it she her in and den Gretel looked her in and she resk her brufer .
ReplyDeleteGreat, Sade! What happened then? How did the children feel in the end?
DeleteFirst hansel and gretel was sleeping at there house and hansel an gretel heard the step mum say to are dad that when we wakeup lets wakeup hansel and gretel to because we are going to bring them deep into the forest so they can never find there way back home so when the stepmother and are dad was sleeping hansel went out side to go and colect some stones so when the stepmother wakesup and are dad we dont have to colect no more stones and then hansel kwikly ran back in side t
ReplyDeleteso that when our stepmother wakesup and our dad they cant shout at us so then hansel and gretel went schrate back to sleep
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Fantastic Shadequa!, Can you think of a different escape plan that Gretel could have come up with?
DeleteGretel escape first gretel wacte up befor the old hag gretel start the ketel and hete the uven the hag wacte up went doun steers wen she did that she said feel the uven o I dote now how like this said the Nast Beas as she bend doun she feelt the uven as she was in there I gave her a poosh and whoch her roste arethter I went and got the cees and let my bruther free he rusht out like a bard we made a quic escape and said how we going to get Akros ha ducks can you pleas bring us a cross yes but at one by one gretel you go a cross firs ok arethter then hansel came on they finely got a cross and found there farver and they wer rich they wer All pleas to see echuver vout with hag they all wer happy to gever
ReplyDeleteYou've remembered lots of details, Sallyanne, great! I especially like the way you describe Hansel rushing out like a bird! Try writing it again and adding full stops and capital letters.
DeleteFirst hansel and gretel wokeup as normal and they put water in the kettle and went back to sleep then they wokeup again and then it was morning and the stepmother and the dad didn't wake up yet so hansel quickly went outside and got alot of stones and then he ran back in side and pretend that he was sleeping then when the stepmother and dad woke up they woke hansel and gretel up so they had to get up out of bed and take off there night clothes and put on his going out clothes and then the stepmother put on her going out clothes as well and they all set off into the forest and they all went deep into the forest and when they was going there hansel was droppig pebbles on the way and when he reach there they was sitting by the tree and the stepmother and the dad said they was coming back for them but they didn't come back so 2 minis after they was looking for the house and they came across a ginger bread house and they ate the ginger bread house and there was a lady at the window and she said come in to the children and they had some food and they went to bed and when they woke up the next morning the the lady was telling gretel to do a lot of stuff and hansel got lock up in a cage.
ReplyDeleteFirst act like you are poting water in the ketle then act like you don't know how to Klime in the oven then when the hag go in posh the meaen old hag in the oven the get you're Brver. And run for dread um
ReplyDeleteWhat does Hansel do after he's free Shadae?
DeleteFirst Hansel and Gretel was sleeping and Gretel got up as normal she put the cetel on and then she lthe fire to cook Hansel. The. Witch got up and said to Hansel get up lazy Boens then she got Hansel on his urme and dragged him in to a cage and loked it. The witch tride to trick Gretel but Gretel but she ses I don't no Howe to get in but the evil witch got in and Gretel gave her a great big push and slammed the oven and. Slam. The dor hansel got. The. Hrey the witch is
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